25 August 2017

grammarcheck

An article, on the topic of scapegoating, is in preparation.
Meanwhile please enjoy the following.


Wrong:

Carefully strained to create a delicious, silky texture, it’s free of fat, reduced sugar, but high in protein.
Better:
... it’s free of fat, has reduced sugar, but is high in protein.

Or:
... it’s free of fat, reduced in sugar, but high in protein.

(label, Arla Foods’ “Skyr” Icelandic-style yogurt drink)